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How Changing Just 2 Words Increased Action by +416%

Sometimes, small tweaks create massive impact.

Case in point: a fascinating study titled “Procrastination of Enjoyable Experiences” by Associate Marketing Professors Suzanne Shu (UCLA) and Ayelet Gneezy (UCSD).

The Setup:

Researchers gave participants a free gift certificate—a no-strings-attached treat. But there was a twist.

  • One group received a certificate that expired in 2 months.
  • The other group got the exact same certificate—but it expired in just 3 weeks.

Everything else was identical.
Same reward. Same value. Same redemption process.

The Result?

Only 6% of people redeemed the 2-month voucher.
But a whopping 31% redeemed the 3-week version.

That’s a +416% increase in redemption—all because of a subtle shift in urgency.

What changed? Just two words:

“Expires in 2 months” → “Expires in 3 weeks”

💡 The Takeaway:

When people feel they have plenty of time, they procrastinate.
But when a deadline feels imminent, they act.

This is the power of perceived urgency.

📌 Why It Matters for You:

Whether you’re running a marketing campaign, launching a product, or sending a promotional email—how you frame time matters.

  • “Offer valid for 60 days” feels distant.
  • “Offer ends in 14 days” feels now.
  • “Just 3 days left” sparks action.

TL;DR:

Deadlines don’t just inform—they motivate.
So next time you want your audience to take action, ask:
Can I shorten the time frame—or make it feel shorter?

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